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Dragira
Apr 19, 2009 0:48:40 GMT -5
Post by dragira2009 on Apr 19, 2009 0:48:40 GMT -5
Name: Dragira(Drahg-eer-ah) "The Prince of Monsters" Species: Dynamosaurus Maximus Alignment: Rogue Height: 44 Meters Length: 91 Meters Mass: 15,000 tons Wingspan: none. Abilities: 1. Regeneration rank 1 2. flight rank 3-Flight Via Fire Breath 3. improved senses rank1 4. 5. 6. 7. Attacks: 1. FlameThrower Rank 1(30 MP) 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. Special Ability: 1. Resistant to psychic powers 2. Weakness: 1. Sensitive to extreme cold temperatures 2. Finisher: 1. Magma super burst. The ability to release all it's energy in one giant explosion, leaving it weakened Personality: Dragira is very Territorial, but won't attack unless he feels that his opponent is a threat. usually he spends his time hunting and swimming Description/Picture: ![](http://fc09.deviantart.com/fs36/f/2008/289/1/1/Dragira_Origins_by_Spuderific.png) Origin: Dragira first appeared in 1964 when he attacked an American Cruiser that was travelling through the Bermuda Triangle, destroying the ship in a matter of minutes. The Crew were able to send out a distress signall to their home port a few moments before the monster decimated their vessel. The origin of this creature is unknown. Many scientists believe that it is an ancient dinosaur awakened by undersea volcanic disturbances near iceland. EDIT: Changed his special abilities and powers and such Edit 2: Changed some of the abilities and powers
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Dragira
Apr 19, 2009 22:10:26 GMT -5
Post by DinoHunter2 on Apr 19, 2009 22:10:26 GMT -5
Alright, needs a few tweaks before we can approve him. Here's what needs attention:
*Since you already have Flight listed under Abilities, you don't need to list it again under Special Abilities.
*You can only have one Special Ability to begin with- you have to make 10 purchases from the Shop before you can add a second one.
*Night vision is not a listed ability- if that's a renamed version of Improved Senses then you need to state that in the description, and say what rank it is. Some explanation to your abilites would also be helpful, especially for Flight. I assume you mean something along the lines of the infamous scene in Godzilla vs Hedorah?
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Dragira
Apr 19, 2009 23:52:59 GMT -5
Post by dragira2009 on Apr 19, 2009 23:52:59 GMT -5
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griff
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Dragira
Apr 20, 2009 0:38:39 GMT -5
Post by griff on Apr 20, 2009 0:38:39 GMT -5
he looks like a DBZ character while flying
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Dragira
Apr 20, 2009 13:56:21 GMT -5
Post by THE GODZILLA on Apr 20, 2009 13:56:21 GMT -5
Assuming you mean Rank 2 of Improved Senses since there isn't a Rank 3... the total MP spent is 535 MP. You are only granted 350 MP to use one each of your two starting monsters. Thus, you are 185 MP over the limit.
Please fix this.
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Dragira
Apr 20, 2009 14:37:36 GMT -5
Post by dragira2009 on Apr 20, 2009 14:37:36 GMT -5
Ok, I'll edit it again. ;D
However It might be a while before I post a 2nd Monster. I'm just going to use this one to sort of 'Test the waters' So to speak
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Dragira
Apr 20, 2009 14:39:29 GMT -5
Post by dragira2009 on Apr 20, 2009 14:39:29 GMT -5
he looks like a DBZ character while flying Heh heh He does?
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Dragira
Apr 20, 2009 14:43:00 GMT -5
Post by griff on Apr 20, 2009 14:43:00 GMT -5
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Dragira
Apr 20, 2009 14:49:05 GMT -5
Post by dragira2009 on Apr 20, 2009 14:49:05 GMT -5
Heh, It does look similiar Doesn't it?
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Dragira
Apr 24, 2009 15:11:45 GMT -5
Post by THE GODZILLA on Apr 24, 2009 15:11:45 GMT -5
You have spent 285 MP. Are you sure you don't want to spend the remaining 65 MP on something else? If not, you will have these 65 MP leftover for later, and the monster will be approved.
I apologize for the wait too. I've been incredibly busy.
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Dragira
Apr 24, 2009 18:11:18 GMT -5
Post by dragira2009 on Apr 24, 2009 18:11:18 GMT -5
Might as well have some to save for later
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Dragira
Apr 25, 2009 10:43:41 GMT -5
Post by THE GODZILLA on Apr 25, 2009 10:43:41 GMT -5
Approved. You have 65 MP remaining for later use.
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